fdfdfd thank you! i work hard on the dialogue. I SAY EVERYTHING OUT LOUD IN HORRIBLE RENDITIONS OF THE ACCENTS IN THE PRIVACY OF MY ROOM TO SEE HOW IF IT FITS. and try to pick up on people's little speech patterns, the way they talk, the emphasis they use and stuff. (like whenever i write toye, i think of his speech about joe toye day, and go off of that. or, i have this quote of babe's written down: "naww, i'm, i'm not saying he's nuts, i'm just sayin', aw, forget it. forget it! aw come'on, you've seen him bill, he's all [flustered]-- wound up like a spring!" that i can hear his voice whenever i read it.

ANYWAY POINT IS, I FIND THE WAY PEOPLE SPEAK/MAKING IT SOUND LIKE GENUINE DIALOGUE REALLY IMPORTANT/SIGNIFICANT TO A CHARACTER.

tl;dr TY BB ♥